twilight tiger

Great poem :) I have a little bit of a review for you though. I was really involved in the poem up until this part: "And now you shout. I ...

Is this a free-verse? If so, it's the best I've read. A nice story being told and exactly the kind of poetry I enjoy reading.

I really love the vocabulary you use in this. EX: "doth" My favorite phrase in your poem..."writ in blood." I didn't think it was possible to cut a word like ...

Your writing is beautiful. Seeing as how this is my first work of yours that I'm reading, I am stunned...but in a good way! I like this poem very much ...

Yea...he was a last minute add on. I didn't really think through his character more until I posted the chapter on here, but I had run out of time to ...

Thank you again :) yay! I got a positive review from flyer! :P Well, I will try to keep my stories from sounding like Twilight...I didn't realize I went that ...

I appreciate you reviews everyone; even your much harsher ones, Flyer :P I don't know what I was thinking...I wrote these all a while ago and don't really remember what ...

This does help, thank you :) I will try to work through the bumpy descriptions. I wrote this a long time ago, so I would have to reread it as ...

thank you :) I edited it and I think it looks better. I appreciate the time you took to edit this.

Thank you :) I edited it and I didn't realize I had so many mistakes! Now it looks alot better, so I appreciate your edits :)

I woke up at noon. My dream last night was so interesting; it must have kept me in its world for as long as it could. The wings…they must have ...

Christine was playing with Tiger when I came out of my room. Her music was off, for once, which explained Tiger's willingness to actually be around her. "Good morning, sleepyhead," ...

"I'm back!" Christine sang as she burst through the door to see me lying on the ground, unmoving. Gasping, she came over. "SERENA! Are you ok????" she collapsed next to ...

Everyone told me I was good at escaping danger. I never believed it, at first. Then, after so many run-in's with criminals, and always escaping unharmed, I began to believe ...

My feet hit the pavement hard and fast. Behind me, I heard hard panting. He was chasing me, all because someone had shoved me into him at the market. The ...